It is the
dark starless
nights;
the silence
they bring,
the flickering
of lights.
An open sky,
a stillness, but a
blur–
All of it;
revealing the
reflection
of her…
@AsfaWrites 🖤
It is the
dark starless
nights;
the silence
they bring,
the flickering
of lights.
An open sky,
a stillness, but a
blur–
All of it;
revealing the
reflection
of her…
@AsfaWrites 🖤
These lines remind me of some of the beautiful words of such great poets as Omar Khayyam, Kahlil Gibran and Rumi.
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“The heart has its own language. The heart knows a hundred thousand ways to speak.” —Rumi ❤
My favourite quote of his. Thank you for commenting 😊
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Beautiful.
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Thankyou 🌸
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Beautifully penned Asfa 🙌💯😻
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Thanks for always appreciating my work, Nirant 🌸 so nice of you.
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Pleasure always 😉 🎀
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So simple yet elegant words to describe night..
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Thankyou🌸
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This is so beautiful
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Thankyou 😁
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My pleasure
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You play with words….truly beautiful!🌟🌙
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Thankyou so much 😄
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Love 😍
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Thankyou 🌸
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🙂
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Nice blog
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Thankyou😁
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Lovely!
I’ve selected you for the Sunshine Blogger Award!
https://stormscanbebeautiful.wordpress.com/2018/12/11/sunshine-blogger-award/
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Wow 😍 thankyou so much J! 💗
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My pleasure!
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Fantastic. 💖💕
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Thankyou😁
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Well written asfa… .I have nominated you for the Sunshine blogger award.. Do visit
https://inspirechange27.wordpress.com/2018/12/13/the-sunshine-blogger-award/
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Thankyou 🌸
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this was a treat to read…
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Thank you so much ☺
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your very welcome
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The last three lines are beyond perfect. It demands a sequel. Keep penning!
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Thank you 😍
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It’s amazing
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Thank you ❤
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Such an amazing thing, to go into archives and see one’s feelings over a period of time. Well said Asfa, well said.
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Thank you 💜
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely poem
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Thank you 💖
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This is actually cute ♥️
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Thank you 💜
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You’re welcome ❤️
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Short and very sweet.
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Thank you Malikah ❤
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So beautifully penned.
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Thank you 💓
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Most welcome
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wonderful , and nice poem.
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Thank you so much Sarika 🙂 I’m glad you liked it.
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Woww these Lines are beautiful
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Thank you so much for your feedback Swati 🙂
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Starless nights sounds rather sad, I think of starless when I lived in a city. To get out on the hills away from polluting light is wonderful to see that great pattern in the sky. Of course, it does cut down the amount of sleep that you get 🙂
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you 🧡
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Wow I love it! This is like my post “Smashed to beauty” Giiirl we’re twin writers! 😇💞
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